Bare with me for awhile, I am in the midst of trying different styles for my poems. I usually rhyme most of mine because I like when the words flow. But it’s time for me to learn new things. So here’s one that doesn’t rhyme at all. Any feedback?


The sun so bright
Does blind my eyes

These birds so sweet
Music to my ears

This fire still burning
Stinging in my nose

The water so salty
Passes o’er my lips

Your touch so loving
Tingles down my spine.

~heart & soul~


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