I am once again participating in Trifecta’s writing challenge.

This weekend’s challenge is to write a story entitled ‘Lost’ in exactly 33 words. The word ‘lost’ can only appear in the title, not your 33 words.

Hope you enjoy.  🙂

She stands alone, your little girl.  Lets a tear roll down her cheek as she walks away and whispers I love you into the rain.  Stranded, but she’ll find her way to you.


34 thoughts on “Lost

    1. well thank you very much, any time I see the sun peeking through the clouds I smile, I take a picture any time I have my phone with me, I like to think that’s her looking down on me.

      My original reply for some reason didn’t actually reply to you, I have corrected this.


      1. Nice, I may have to meander over that way and check it out. How nice to meet someone how loves the sky as much as I do. You have truly made my day.


  1. It seems so strange to say that this was lovely but there was something beautiful about it. I’m very sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing.


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